Gordon Edes from the Boston Globe is doing the blogging for Extra Bases today while Amalie Benjamin is off on a special assignment. He shared an email he got from a reader, which is absolutely hysterical.
Geez who ever okayed you to write about a ball game — wiasted their time> I certainly wouk ldn”t “but ” a boston globe for your wriong aint worth the newspaper price .. F quoting words u used today__flat tire–nascar —Iwoukdnt read further –it weas pooer -stupid writing a waiste of my time!!!
get a few examples of good wroting –read other writers marratives —& oldies pre war or of the 40″s To 50″&60″s